I modified this older work and converted it into couplets, each comprising a tetrameter followed by a heptameter. I think it reads better now.
Oh, go to sleep, AbdurRahmaan,
Oh, go to sleep, AbdurRahmaan,
The stars are out, the sun is gone until another dawn,
When a splash of gold on angel wings
Shall wash you in the warmth it brings as its companion sings
A song upon your dew drop face,
Your petal palms and sweet embrace; our fingers interlace.
And then my worries melt away
Like snow that sees a balmy day, when we peacefully lay
Upon the grass so soft and still,
Beneath a leafy bough until a garden on a hill
Beneath a leafy bough until a garden on a hill
Is where we find ourselves with glee-
Ful sweet familiarity with our destiny.
So, go to sleep, AbdurRahmaan,
The stars are out, the sun is gone until another dawn.
sweet :-)
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ReplyDeleteBeautifully worded lullaby and I enjoyed reading ever word of it.
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